Could someone rate my yugioh deck please?

Sounds good but what you should do is spread out your deck on the floor and see what cards go together ok or see if some of the cards are isolated with a different effect than to the others kind of like having an ojama brother and not the rest and try and get a few combos like a card that lets you get a card combo immedietly make sure to have a good balance of each defence and offence we can't tell you what to do because we would tell you what is right for us the only person that can tell you what is right is you test out your strategys and see what you base your dueling on and change your deck to help you achieve it I hope this helps.